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Monday, 09 July 2007
Media Violence Causes Teen Violence

This essay is about how the media plays a part of teen violence. How what teens see and hear effects their behavior. What they see on T.V. makes teens more aggressive. There was a study where 8 year oldes that watched violent T.V. shows would go around kicking and hitting people in effect made them more aggressive when there are older. Also video games played a big part. Violent video games where kids would play them for hours on end would take in those voilent behavors. Last was rap music. Rap music promoted violence and refered to woman as bitches and hoes, and the body language promoted aggrissave behavior.

posted by: vick85 at 01:45 | link | comments |

Should Women Go into Combat?

This essay is about how the author fells about women goin to combat. She at first thought that maby the should go but now she dont belive that women should serve in combat. Its not the mental aspect of it its just the phyisal part. Women can do everthing that a man can do mentily but phyicaly its not possable. She states that women have half the upper body strenth then men do. That means that they cant do any hevy lifting. They cant run as lon and as fast as a man can. Also women cant bond with men in the same way that me do.There is a big performance gap between men and woman. In a combat syand point as a unit if a person cant pull his or her weight it becomes a weaker unit.

posted by: vick85 at 01:28 | link | comments |

Why Don't These Women Just Leave?

This essay is about a woman explaning her abusive marrage for 19 years. She stated that she didnt leave because that she thought it was her fault that the relationship was going the way it was going. She blamed everthing on herslef. How she was getting beat, misstreated, just not being treated like a lady. She thought this because of how she was rasied. She didnt see this as a child. She was use to seeing a working relationship form her mother and father. So she seeked help and went to a profissional and got cousling. Seh finally realised that it was un fixably. So she announced that she was leaving the relationship after 19 years of being beat, misstreated, just abused she finally got out of the relationship.

posted by: vick85 at 00:31 | link | comments |

No Comprendo

This essay is about a yong lady that has moved to the U.S. from South America. She has graduated from highschool, and have recived scholarshipsby severel collages to play soccer. She was scarded that she wouldent be able to keep up with her grades and class work because she spoke with an heavy accent and her comprehension and writing skills were deficient. It was like this because the public school didnt make spanish speeking students to learn english a major priority. Now instead of her going to one of the school that gave her a scholarship she went to a school that she will never have to put her english to the test.

posted by: vick85 at 00:02 | link | comments |

Sunday, 08 July 2007
Dream House

This is an essay is about this lady that when she was growing up she stayed in a little house that only had one bathroom. And how her mother and father was always talking about their dream house. It took them 20 years befor they moved out into there dream house. She compared the two houses together like how the rest room was the center of the house. It was the center of attion. How they use to wait on eachother to use it. To the new dream house. It really didnt fell like home to her.

posted by: vick85 at 23:41 | link | comments |

Neat People vs. Sloppy People

This essey is about the difference between neat people and sloppy people. How sloppy people live in never never land. Where one dsy they will do this one day they will do that and it never gets done. They never get neat, and they save everthing. They cant part with anything. Where neat people are always cleaning up and throw every thing away.The only thing messy at a neat person house is the trash can. They place neatness over thing.

posted by: vick85 at 09:22 | link | comments |

Freewriting

This is an essay about freewriting. How freewriting helpes you write by unlocking your mind. Like where you would stop and think about what you would write or how would you write it. It is never ending writing. even if you have to write the same worde over over and over agian dont stop writing. It also helpes you find your voice in writing. Some people write like they talk. It helps writing come more easyer to you.

posted by: vick85 at 08:50 | link | comments |

Paterson Public Library

This essay is about  this Puerto Rican girl that gorws into a woman and how her childhood was as a navy brat. Her mom didnt speek english, and she was always getting beat up at school. So she turned to books to help her get away from everthing that was happining in her life. This one Libary help her out so much. How she would get two books every week that she could read. Also how even now if she vitis a library it recharges her brain like batteries.

posted by: vick85 at 08:19 | link | comments |

My Daughter Smokes

This essay is about this lady named Alice Walker conserned about her daughter smokeing. It has been a bad habbit in her family. Her great grand dad and her dad smoked. Her dad had bronchitis and enphysema from smoking. He also died, so she is very worried that her daughter has picked up the habbit.

posted by: vick85 at 07:33 | link | comments |

Saturday, 07 July 2007
Summer Reading

This essay is about an college professer reviling a life changing experince in his childhood. When he was 14 he cut grass over the summer. One of his coustermers was an old man, this old man wouldnt pay him. Instead of paying him he gave him books. The book open up his mind to things he have never thought about. Changing the way he thinks from then on. That chang in his life inspired him to be a collage professer. 

posted by: vick85 at 19:21 | link | comments |